Hi Carson What a cool story. I liked the sound of Kirby by your description of him being pink and cute, however when I read on I can see he faces many challenges. It's sad that he is depressed and only has one friend. I wonder if he will make more friends? Good work
Hi Carson
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story. I liked the sound of Kirby by your description of him being pink and cute, however when I read on I can see he faces many challenges. It's sad that he is depressed and only has one friend. I wonder if he will make more friends?
Good work